Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Crit Request

On the wall now:
Too many birds? Circles? I think I need to wash over some of the circles with pale blue or white to tone them down. Also perhaps I will add weight on the left. What goes in the bottom right corner? Something warm, perhaps, to echo the top right, and the right hand tree.

4 comments:

Lizzie said...

I think the birds are OK. I agree that some of the blue circles need toning down. Something else warm is good. Maybe print over the bottom lefthand dark green to break it up a bit and carry it across to the bottom right.

Linda Branch Dunn said...

ah. Printing on the bottom. I hadn't thought of that. Thanks!

Vivika said...

Hey Linda, how about putting some blue circles between the two birds on the right (using the circles to transition between the two bird pieces). Maybe you could repeat the circles on the bird fabric, or use a thin border of blue circles on the right... There are two pieces of blue circles, and you probably need three or another odd number. Asymetry is the thing that is needed most here. I also like that the upper right is pink... nice surprise color here.

Leslie Avon Miller said...

I look forward to seeing how you you find your way to the finish here. Great bones and ideas you have about them.