A new piece began as the old piece finished.
The effect felt boxy, flat.
So I worked back into several prints with dye and paint,
to modify stark contrasts and make both text and image more oblique.
This is how it looked when I left.
That evening I thought, if it's about sky, make it about sky.
This is the edited version, manipulated in Photoshop.
Tomorrow I go back to the studio and see if this works.